C.J. Mustang

Ari smiled. "Nice to meet you, Ray. We need to talk." Gautier looked over the two wolves. They look fairly healthy and strong. They can become very useful to us. ...

Gautier paused for a moment. Do you sense that? Sense what? asked Ari. Two more dragons. Their scent is unrecognizable, Gautier said as he lowered himself to the ground. He ...

Ariadne stared at them in shock, then glared in anger. "Private Haven!" she bellowed. "Get on your damn dragon and come with me! NOW!" Gautier growled deep in his throat, ...

Gautier snarled and his top lip curled up. If I wasn't with the Riders, I would bite his head head off, he told Ariadne. Ariadne walked towards Haven with light, ...

um, I thought this poem was kind of confusing. there are too many big words, in my opinion. You can search it But you won't find

I want to play, too! Name: Alexandra Johnson Race: human Age: 19 Team: none yet Background: she lived just like a normal girl, but when she turned 18, she had ...

General Ariadne's light blue eyes flashed with anger. "He's mocking me, Gautier." she said through clenched teeth. Calm down, Ari, soothed Gautier, clicking his teeth softly in her ear. He's ...

I liked your poem, though I couldn't quite understand what it was saying at the beginning. It kind of sounds like William Shakespeare at the end. I really liked it! ...

**Okay, here we go!! You excited? Time to start!!** "Have you heard what was going on in Athanasia?" asked a man to the bartender. The woman at the end of ...

And also, we won't start until AyumiGosu17 comes back from boot camp *glares at name with envy*, so you guys won't have to check back in until Saturday. That gives ...

The best of luck to you! I hope you win! I do agree with bkwrm, though. the past tense and present tense thing is a bit confusing. Other than that, ...

:D yay! I'm so glad more people responded!! :D So, Rubric: Power: Magic-dead. Magic will not work on him or his mount. (Am I allowed?) That's fine, and dragons can't ...

I really like your poem! I only have a few suggestions, though: A minute closer to death I am than I was a minute ago... I've lost my hope maybe ...

This is kind of something that is branching off of my current novel. You can either be a civilian, an elf, a dragon rider, or a dragon. Elves can also ...

This poem was kind of confusing to me, mostly because of how it was laid out. I think it should be put in stanzas. You also should probably have some ...